Anne:

Great detail. Love the pictures. It was easy to understand the power point.It shows you have a good understanding of the Masterslide because you could see the repetition of the pictures. You could see that you have researched well from your references. For improvement, next time you should add more detail. You could also add a more eye-catching background. 

Hadia:

The layout its neat and organize, I like the graphs included ,the pictures were attractive.However, next time you should make the background more eye catching and you could be more specific of what  you written.